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Watch the way the words flow,
Dark colors spilling from my pen.
Molding a new existence,
One very few could live within.

Don't venture in too deeply,
Nothing is as it seems.
Sick twisted creatures thrive here,
This place that haunts my dreams.

Poisoned are the pretty things,
Sweetness, an evil foe.
My muse is dark and nasty,
Only seeds of evil grow.

Wonderland needs a rainbow,
My pen needs colored ink.
I try to capture beauty,
Yet, my words all fade and shrink.
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This was supposed to be a happy poem about a magical place created only for us when we write..but it turned out being more about a dark evil place created when I write..& about how, no matter how hard I try, I just cannot write happy poems. :iconwhyyyyplz:
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:icongileadsbalm:
Last stanza is awesome d(^-^)
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~crazi-4-muffinz Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! It was hard for me to find the right words in that stanza, so I'm really happy to hear that you liked it :D
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:icongileadsbalm:
You're welcome! :D
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:iconmichel-le-fou:
Really, poetry must reflect the mood of the poet at moment of composing. I find serious or sad poetry more believable.
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~crazi-4-muffinz Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think that's my problem. When I'm happy I don't feel inspired to write, but when I'm depressed I do. Of course I can't write about being happy when I'm not feeling happy.
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:iconmichel-le-fou:
U're right. I feel that way too, sometimes.
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~Contradictory55 Dec 8, 2012  Student Writer
OH MY GOODNESS. I adore this darkness. It's exactly the kind I love XD
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~crazi-4-muffinz Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you like it :D
Good thing you like dark poems so much..cause I fail at writing happy cheerful ones lol
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~Contradictory55 Dec 9, 2012  Student Writer
:iconhighfive1plz::iconhighfive2plz: Me too XD
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~JesusSavedMe777 Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow. Nice. Why don't you like these?
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