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I'm a broken Angel,
my wings are fiberglass.
I'm a broken Angel,
Death has come to pass.
I'm a broken Angel,
My heart is dark and gray,
I'm a broken Angel,
For my sin I have to pay.
I'm a broken Angel,
My halo turned to ash.
I'm a broken Angel,
I'm about to crash.
I'm a broken Angel,
I'm dead down deep inside.
I'm a broken Angel,
It's raining all the tears I've cried.
I'm a broken Angel,
Heaven is far away.
I'm a broken Angel,
In the dirt is where I'll stay.
my wings are fiberglass.
I'm a broken Angel,
Death has come to pass.
I'm a broken Angel,
My heart is dark and gray,
I'm a broken Angel,
For my sin I have to pay.
I'm a broken Angel,
My halo turned to ash.
I'm a broken Angel,
I'm about to crash.
I'm a broken Angel,
I'm dead down deep inside.
I'm a broken Angel,
It's raining all the tears I've cried.
I'm a broken Angel,
Heaven is far away.
I'm a broken Angel,
In the dirt is where I'll stay.
Literature
Tragedy
I’m the girl in the books that is a mystery. A tragic heroin that gives the main character a new perspective.
Quiet girl, riot girl. A rebel, a tragedy.
I’m the wild ride, the adventure, the challenge. I’m the girl he wants to know all about until he goes too far and I’m no longer real.
I’m the manic depressive pixie dream girl with a tragic end.
I’m not his type but he goes after me anyway because my wild eyes, wild hair, wild life, wild thoughts.
Oh look, I’ve got an attitude. Screaming at the world, fuck the system, tongue as sharp as a knife attitude. Middle fingers, swearing at everyone, bit
Literature
Death?
In the end I will not run
I will embrace it with open arms
For that is all you can do
Sure some may be sad
But you must always think about yourself first
Otherwise you will become corrupted
Lost
Your end will come quicker and no one would notice
So In the end I will not run
I will embrace it for that is all I can do
Literature
Watching Innocence Die
I sit alone watching intently
I watch the young spirit
She smiles wide
It brings warmth to my heart
To see such a sunny smile again
The smile that has been ripped off of me
I miss that smile
That girl sits in her classroom drawing
She draws what she wants to be
She wants to be a princess, a fairy, a hero, everything.
I sit and stare at the imagination
Her innocence and beauty shines like sparkling diamonds
She believes, she smiles, she lives.
She is life.
I was life.
I was her once.
I had innocence, I had her beauty, I had the light in my heart.
But it was put out like a candle.
The spirit inside me broke
It's dead
It lef
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i LOVE this one.
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Overall
Vision
Originality Technique ImpactVision: The vision..it's like you're writing about is how humans came to be. For me, it's like...what a human is. A broken angel trying to go home.
Originality: It's not that original, broken angels, but at the same time, it really is, because the angel is so...human?
Technique: The rhythm is nice, and the rhymes flow. They're not awkward.
Impact: The impact is from the ending, because it's like you're saying that this is how humans came to be. Because we can't fly, can't always swim, we're stuck in the dirt and heaven? Heaven is a far-away dream, a fantasy. We've lost our halos, and our wings are too broken to see. Death will come, our hearts are grey, our sin piles up, and our halos are lost. It rains daily for some, till all the tears finally fall, but then the ground dries up anyways.
Good poem, all in all! I love it >.<